Double page spread: FIRST DRAFT

Out of all of my pages I was the most satisfied with the end product of this one, I feel it's very suitable to the target audience, it addresses the theme quite well and to a high level and I think there's just the right amount of content involved within the whole entire page! I didn't have many improvement gave to me for this page, and as I'm satisfied with the page I find it hard to pick out anything I'm not satisfied with or could possibly make any better. However, I did make quite a few spelling errors throughout the many columns and titles etc. These have now been sorted and altered to a professional standard...